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The chart below shows the annual rice production in four countries in 2005, 2010 and2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the annual rice production in four countries in 2005, 2010 and2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart compares data in terms of
rice
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 production in four different countries , namely A, B, C and D , in 2005, 2010 and 2015.
Overall
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, in A and D countries, there was a slight growth in annual
rice
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 production,
while
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 B and C countries experienced some fluctuations over the period. At the beginning of 2005,
rice
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 formulation rose to just 45
million
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tonnes
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, followed by a small growth to just under 50
million
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tonnes
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 in 2010.
Rice
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 production reached its peak with 50
million
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tonnes
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 in 2015.
In addition
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, 3
million
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tonnes
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 of
rice
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 were produced in country D in 2005 , and
this
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 figure remains constant during the next 5 years. Later,
rice
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 preparation in
this
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 country moderately climbed to only 5
million
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tonnes
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. In 2005, the number of
tonnes
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 which was prepared was only just over 25
million
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.
Then
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, it substantially jumped to a significant 43
million
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tonnes
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 in 2010.
However
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, despite these changes, the index of
rice
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 manufacturing in C gradually decreased to just above 35
million
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tonnes
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 in 2015.
Moreover
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, in 2005, about 5
million
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rice
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 was manufactured in
this
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 area, followed by a sudden increase to 6
million
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.
At the end
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 of the period,
this
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 number went down to 5
million
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tonnes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rice, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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