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Band 4.5

Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain what is wrong with the furniture - say what action you would like the landlord to take.

Dear Mr. Salamanca . My name is Tomás Alcaide, I am
resident
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a resident
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 of
appartment
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apartment
 455 of the apartment complex located at Alcalde Monckeberg Avenue. The reason
of
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for
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this
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 letter is to
complaint
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complain
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 about the furniture of the residence. To be more
especific
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specific
, I am
reffering
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referring
 to the kitchen's table that was not fixed as it was asked, by my wife, before we moved into the place. As you can imagine,
this
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 is an issue because my spouse has to use the
dinner
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 room's table to prepare the food and afterwards take it to the kitchen to cook it, which is extremely uncomfortable.
Therefore
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, I would like you to
cantact
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contact
 a
contratist
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contractor
 that can repair or replace
this
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 damaged table during next week.
Otherwise
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, we will be forced to leave the building and ask
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for the
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the
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a
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 total refund of the year that already paid to you when we
sign
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signed
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 the contract yesterday. Looking forward to having a satisfactory and rapid response from you. Yours sincerely. Tomás Alcaide.

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task achievement
Make sure to proofread for spelling mistakes like 'complaint' and 'specific'.
coherence and cohesion
Try to organize your paragraphs better. Each paragraph should focus on one idea clearly.
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Use a friendlier tone to encourage a positive response from your landlord.
task achievement
You clearly stated the problem with the furniture, which shows good communication.
coherence and cohesion
Your introduction and closing are polite, which is very nice.
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