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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts illustrate the variations in terms of the average proportions of three nutrients in typical American meals, which are unhealthy if absorbed
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, sodium and saturated fat both account for the highest percentage in dinner,
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 added sugar is the most in snacks. Notably, the three nutrients above make up the least in breakfast. Sodium and saturated fat are the largest proportions in dinner, with 43
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 and 37
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, respectively. What’ more, the two nutrients are minimal in breakfast, the former is 14
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 is equal to snacks
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 the latter has
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 figure with 16
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, the share of sodium in lunch is 29
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, closely followed by saturated fat, with 26
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. Added sugar is the main ingredient in snacks
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 occupies 42
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, the secondary is dinner, with 23
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. The two meals above take up over
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, the percentage of added sugar in breakfast is the lowest, with 16
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 is 3
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 less than lunch.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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