The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie chart illustrates the differences in the
proportion
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of three types of nutrients which were supplied by four meals in the USA.
Overall
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, dinner accounted for the largest
proportion
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of sodium and saturated fat, except for added sugar, which was mostly supported by
snacks
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.
By contrast
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, breakfast constituted the lowest percentage across all three categories. For sodium and saturated fat, both of them shared similar characteristics. Dinner accounted for the largest
proportion
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at 43% and 37% respectively, followed by lunch making up 29% and 26%.
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, the
proportion
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of
snacks
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of sodium was 14%, with the same figure for breakfast.
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,
snacks
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accounted for a higher
proportion
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of saturated fat than breakfasts at 21% and 16%. As for the remaining category of added sugar,
snacks
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made up the highest
proportion
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at 42%, followed by dinner accounting for 23%.
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, lunch took up a lower percentage at 19%, with the similar share for breakfast at 16%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "by contrast, moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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