The graph below shows prediction about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparision where relevant.

The graph below shows prediction about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparision where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows prediction about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparision where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the millions of
students
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studying the three biggest world languages
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English
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, English
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, Spanish, and Mandarin
between
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, between
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the years 2020 and 2030.
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English
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is the highest against
Mandarin
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Mandarin,
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followed by
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place
Spainish
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Spanish
. The three languages follow similar rates as they continue through the events,
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as Spanish and Mandarin
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occuring
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occurring
rates as they both end in 2030 between the 500 and 600 rate and met at the same level in 2025 with about 330 million
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studying both languages respectively. The differences are
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mostly by
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as it was by far the most out of the three with an
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number of 550 million
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and grew impressively until
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2024,
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where a drop
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occured
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occurred
till 2026.
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recovered and
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into 2030 as the highest with 730 million
students
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.

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