The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of

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members

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for various five activities (film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis, and musical performances) at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia

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the between 2000 and 2020.

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, it can be seen from the graph that amateur dramatics

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activities over the period fell.

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, Table tennis and musical performances sharply rose

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the film

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club and martial arts

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remained stable throughout the

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, the film club was the most preferred option, with approximately 65

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at the beginning of the

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.

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, after

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participants relatively decreased and reached 60 in 2010, but

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of participants again reached around 65 in 2020. Martial arts over the

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fluctuated

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it started at approximately 35, but

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of the

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it remained stable.

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, amateur dramatics began about 25, five years later, the number slightly increased to 29 in 2005, but after that it dramatically dropped and reached

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7 in 2020. In 2005 and 2020, there were no

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in musical performances compared to other activities. People started participating in it after 2005

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started

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participants in 2010,

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increased and reached around 19

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