You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter your friend. In your letter: Say where you are going Describe your house Explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house •You should •You do NOT need to write your own address

Dear Ram, Hope you are pink

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am going away for my vacation for one week to Italy. During

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please look after my house.

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Jul 15, 2025

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task achievement

Make sure to clearly describe your house and give more detailed instructions for house care.

coherence and cohesion

Try to organize your letter into clear sections, each focused on one main idea.

coherence and cohesion

Use a proper greeting and a friendly closing to enhance the tone of your letter.

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You started with a friendly greeting, which is nice for a letter.

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You mentioned the purpose of your letter straight away, which is good for clarity.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

41 words

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