The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
provied
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provided
chart illustrates the split of household chores by gender in Great
Britian
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Britain
.
Overall
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, there are significant
diffirences
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differences
between
men
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and
women
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in daily activities.
Women
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spend more
time
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than
men
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in cooking, baking, washing up,
take
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taking
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care of children, clothes, ironing, and
sweing
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sewing
.
While
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men
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tend to spend
time
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in gardening,
petcare
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pet care
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, and maintenance odd jobs.
Fisrt
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First
and foremost, looking at
main
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the main
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tasks done by females. They spend 74 minutes per day
to
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apply
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cooking, baking, and washing up - the highest figure for females.
Women
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also
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spend nearly one hour
to
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apply
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cleaning house,
adn tyding
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and tidying
, which
far
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is far
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higher than
men
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. Again, the figure shows that
woman
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women
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play a role
take
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in taking
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care of children and play
which
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, which
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nearly
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is nearly
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two times higher than
men
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. Turning to
remaining
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the remaining
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gender,
while
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women
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spend all their
time
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to do
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doing
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housework,
men
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nearly spend
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spend nearly
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all their
time
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on gardening and
petcare
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pet care
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which
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, which
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is the highest figure.
Men
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also
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play a role in
maintenace
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maintenance
odd jobs because it
take
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takes
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26 minutes per day
of
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for
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them to do their jobs.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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