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The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000
The pie charts compare the amount of
electricity
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 produced using five different fuel sources—coal,
oil
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, natural
gas
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,
hydro
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power
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, and nuclear
power
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—in Australia and
France
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 in 1980 and 2000.
Overall
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, Australia’s
electricity
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production
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 became increasingly reliant on coal over the 20-year period,
while
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France
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 saw a dramatic shift toward nuclear energy, which became its dominant source by 2000. In 1980, Australia produced 100
units
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 of
electricity
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. Half of that came from coal,
while
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hydro
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power
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 and natural
gas
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 each contributed 20
units
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, and
oil
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 supplied 10
units
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. By 2000, total
electricity
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production
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 rose to 170
units
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. Coal output increased significantly to 130
units
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, accounting for more than three-quarters of the total.
Hydro
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power
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also
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 rose to 36
units
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,
while
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oil
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 and
gas
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 dropped to 2
units
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 each.
France
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,
on the other hand
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, produced 90
units
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 of
electricity
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 in 1980. Coal and natural
gas
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 each provided 25
units
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,
oil
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 contributed 15
units
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, and nuclear energy generated 20
units
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.
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Hydro
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Hydropower
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power
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 remained the smallest source at 5
units
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. By 2000, total
production
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 doubled to 180
units
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, and nuclear
power
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 became the leading source with 126
units
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.
Oil
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 and
gas
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 declined to 2
units
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 apiece,
while
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 coal remained steady at 25. *In summary*,
while
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 both countries increased their
electricity
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production
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 over the two decades, Australia maintained its reliance on coal,
whereas
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France
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 shifted dramatically toward nuclear
power
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, oil, gas, hydro, power, france, production, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity production
  • Fuel source
  • Renewable sources
  • Non-renewable sources
  • Significant change
  • Evolved
  • Dominant source
  • Introduction of new sources
  • Reliance
  • Electricity production mix
  • Environmental implications
  • Future trend
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