The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
The map presents two proposed locations for a new school in the
town
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of Canterbury.
Overall
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, the first site (S1) is in a more rural landscape on the outskirts of the
town
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,
while
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the second site (S2) is located in an urban area near the edge of the
town
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centre
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.
Canterburry
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Canterbury
has a small, no-traffic
town
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centre
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surrounded by residential housing, with two main roads connecting to other regions: one leading to the northeast to Sturry, and the other southwest to Chartham.
Additionally
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,
this
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town
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is bordered by countryside, and there is a university in
northern
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the northern
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part of the area, between the countryside and the housing area. S1 is proposed to be constructed to the northeast of the
town
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centre
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,
situatued
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situated
in the countryside and close to the main road leading to Sturry, which is only 5km away and has a population of 7,000.
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,
although
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S2 is located within the
town
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centre
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and closer to Chartham,
this
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nearby
town
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is farthest away (around 7km) and has a smaller population of 4,500.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • contrast
  • location
  • accessibility
  • residential areas
  • facilities
  • traffic
  • transportation
  • environment
  • cost
  • feasibility
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