Last Friday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plate. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: •Where and when you lost your bag •What your bag looks like •What its content were
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Ashunkumar Patel
,
I am writing Punctuation problem
.
this
letter to raise a concern regarding my cabin Linking Words
bag
Use synonyms
which
I forgot to collect from the security check-in at booth four.
Punctuation problem
, which
As
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Last
last
Linking Words
Friday
I took flight(JFK256) from New York to Paris Punctuation problem
Friday,
and
as soon as Punctuation problem
, and
arrived
Correct pronoun usage
I arrived
at
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apply
home
I recognised that one Punctuation problem
home,
bag
Use synonyms
is
left behind. I believe that my wait period after security check-in was Wrong verb form
was
of
one hour, so approximately 7:30 PM I put my Change preposition
apply
bag
on Use synonyms
plate
. As Correct article usage
the plate
inspection
Correct article usage
the inspection
gets
completed, Verb problem
was
meanwhile
I had an important phone call, and Rephrase
apply
due to
Linking Words
Correct article usage
the hussle
Correct your spelling
hustle
hussle
I forgot to collect that Punctuation problem
hussle,
bag
.
The Use synonyms
bag
is in blue colored hard plastic case from American Tourister. The size of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
bag
is Correct article usage
the bag
same
as the cabin requirement, Correct article usage
the same
while
there is Linking Words
tag
Correct article usage
a tag
of
my name Change preposition
with
refering
Correct your spelling
referring
the
address of my Change preposition
to the
destination
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destination,
that is
, Linking Words
of
Paris.
In that Change preposition
apply
bag
, there Use synonyms
are
set of clothes, a pair of shoes, and some important travelling documents. Verb problem
is are
Apart from
Linking Words
this
, it contains my gadget accessories like cables, adapters and Linking Words
few
cash of $250, in the bills of $50.
Kindly, I would like to request Correct article usage
a few
you that
look into Correct word order
that you
this
matter Linking Words
in
Change preposition
on
priority
basis, and let me know Correct article usage
a priority
for
the procedures how it will be returned.
Yours Change preposition
apply
Sincerly
,
Ashun PatelCorrect your spelling
sincerely
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task achievement
Make sure to clearly state what you want from the airline at the end of your letter to improve task response.
coherence and cohesion
Try to use more linking words to connect your ideas and improve the flow of your writing.
coherence and cohesion
Be careful with spelling and grammar, like 'hussle' should be 'hustle' and other minor mistakes, to make your writing clearer.
task achievement
You provided detailed information about where and when you lost the bag, which is very good for the task.
task achievement
Your description of the bag and its contents is clear and helps the reader understand better.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,