The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided figures demonstrate the variation in the percentage of the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinion of full-time and part-time
students
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about its services in 2010.
Overall
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, it is clearly evident that the full-time student was happier than the part-time student about the support offered. Meanwhile, the full-time
group
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was less happy than the other
group
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of pupils about the current opening hours of the library.
According to
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what is shown in the pie charts, among full-time
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, the percentage of satisfaction with
its
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their
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support and opening hours was (55%-67%) respectively.
However
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, the average of how happy for other
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was (20%-72%) was
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too.
In contrast
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, the proportion of quite or a little bit happy was similar in all pie charts
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around one third ,except for the part-time
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, who were at a quarter of the percentage of quite happy. Full-time and
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part-time
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students
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were not satisfied at all with the current opening hours , with 1% .Part-time
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were 5% ,so that means that both groups were satisfied with the services of the library.
On the other hand
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, the part-time pupils were extremely unhappy with the It support offered at 45% which was a huge proportion .
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, the full-time
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was
also
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not happy at all , at around 13%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • university library
  • full-time students
  • part-time students
  • opinions
  • services
  • satisfaction
  • comparison
  • satisfaction levels
  • different library services
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