You should spend 20 minutes on this task. You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping center near your home. Write a letter to the council in your letter. - Say how you heard about the plan. - Explain how you feel about it. - Ask for more information about it.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to a shopping mall
project
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that is
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considered to be built around my house. I noticed the plan from two foreign people in the public bus when I commuted to
workplace
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the workplace
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three days ago. They were talking about how
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project
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the project
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could improve the
neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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and
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schema
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the schema
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was
also
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evaluated. Since I
realized
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the plan, I did search about the
project
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to get
familiar more
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more familiar
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regarding
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with
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next
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the next
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stages in the website. After I learned more details, I
entirely
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apply
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have a sense of satisfaction because
this
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project
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might be a milestone for
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the neighborhood
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neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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in
the
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its
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development. I
also
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feel very optimistic about
this
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environment because
such
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mall
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a mall
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can contribute
the
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to the
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values
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value
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of houses positively in the coming years. I would be so grateful if you could send a brief email to residents, including
myself
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me
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, around
this
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project
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area.
This
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might be more insightful to follow current developments. I would
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appreciate
if
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it if
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you use more signs to inform residents
for
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of
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possible risks
due to
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construction
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the construction
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site. I look forward to receiving
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reply. Yours faithfully,  Osguk Tolga.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to organize your ideas clearly. Each paragraph should have a clear main idea that is easy to follow.
coherence and cohesion
Try to use simpler sentences and avoid complex phrases. This will help in making your message clearer.
task response
Ensure that you completely answer the task. More details about how you feel and why could improve your response.
task achievement
You have a polite and respectful tone in your letter, which is important in formal writing.
task achievement
You clearly express your feelings about the project and give reasons, which is good for task achievement.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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