The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
process
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of producing ethanol fuel from corn and the measures of
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campaign.
Overall
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, the
process
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contains 9 steps,
thus
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, beginning with some basic materials and storing,
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at the end
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of the
process
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is storing and transporting.
To begin
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with, at these first steps, we need to choose and collect all of the fresh
corn
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corn,
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then
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corn
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the corn
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is stored for a long time before milling it to become little pieces.
Moreover
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, we can easily see that these materials will be boiled with water to become a mixture for about 4 hours.
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, after 4 steps, we start to ferment
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product
approximately
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48 hours to
become more
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make it
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fresh
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fresher
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.
Next,
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this
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process
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starts to separate to liquid
by
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from
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solid
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the solid
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by-product
and
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, and
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then
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this
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mixture will
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be
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Ethanol at 5 hours to become
more
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apply
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fresh
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fresher
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and
tightly
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tighter
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. At the next step,
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process
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will continue storing in a plastic container before
transporting
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being transported
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for the commercial market in the city.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ethanol
  • corn
  • harvesting
  • milling
  • cooking
  • fermentation
  • distillation
  • dehydration
  • enzymes
  • fermentable sugars
  • concentration
  • anhydrous ethanol
  • fuel
  • processed
  • mixture
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • high temperatures
  • surface area
  • separation
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