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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.
The chart illustrates the amount of
waste
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production
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 in millions of
tonnes
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 in six different
countries
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, including
Ireland
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, Japan, Korea,
Poland
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, Portugal, and the US over a twenty-year period.
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, the US has the highest
waste
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production
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 of the 6
countries
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 on the
table
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,
Ireland
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is
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has
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 the lowest
waste
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and
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, and
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 just one
country
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 has
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 reduction in
waste
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production
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 is Korea. Regarding the
countries
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 have low
waste
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 over 20 years, in the
table
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,
Ireland
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,
Poland
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, and Portugal are three
countries
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 which have a million
tonnes
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 in
waste
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production
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, lower than 10 million, and in 1990,
Ireland
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 had extremely high
waste
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, so it did not appear on the
table
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, and in the two stages, in 1980 and in 2000,
Ireland
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 had 0.6 and 5
tonnes
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;
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,
Poland
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 had 4 and 6,6
tonnes
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, and Portugal had 2 and 5
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, in 1990,
Ireland
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 had not index on the
table
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,
Poland
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 has 5
tonnes
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 and Portugal had 3
tonnes
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. Regarding the
countries
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 have high
waste
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 over 20 years, the
waste
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production
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 in the US is over 100
tonnes
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, even up to 200
tonnes
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 in 2000, at the same time, Korea in 1980 was like
Ireland
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, the quantity of
waste
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 was too low so it did not appear and
this
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country
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 is the only
country
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 that has reduced
waste
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 in 6
countries
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,
moreover
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, Japan is the
country
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, which
also
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 takes the high
waste
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, 28
tonnes
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 in 1980, reached 32
tonnes
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 in 1980 and 53
tonnes
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 in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, production, tonnes, countries, ireland, poland, table, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
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