The maps below show part of a village in 1910, and the same part of that village in 2010.

The map illustrated the changes in the part of the village in 1910 and the same one in 2010.

Overall

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, Shelton village had seen significant changes

about

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the facilities and layout of the village. Beginning from the middle of the

maps

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map

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, the middle areas had changed a lot of facilities

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such

Punctuation problem

, such

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as: destroyed Large

House

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, Baker and Grocer

instead

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Cafe

Correct article usage

the Cafe

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;

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moreover

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, all the trees had been felled

and

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, and

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the small

house

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was

level

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levelled

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up to the buildings. Houses

also

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widen the road for the citizens. On the top right corner of the maps, post offices and houses were still there

and

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, and

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more houses in the face of London road.

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, starting from the High

street

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Street

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, in 1980 there were only 2 buildings

but

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, but

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in 2010 those facilities were

further

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enhanced by the construction of 4 more buildings, larger than the previous 2. On School Road, the school remained the same until 2010. Butcher and 1

house

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were removed and replaced with a Supermarket and Parking

and

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, and

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house

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was replaced with a Bank .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words house with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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175 words

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