The diagram illustrates the production of ethanol.

The diagram illustrates the production of ethanol.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram illustrates the production of ethanol.
The diagram illustrates the production of
ethanol
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, it is a cyclic process that involves a series of natural steps. The process begins with planting trees and culminates in producing
ethanol
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gases in multiple formats.
To begin
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with
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with,
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the production of
ethanol
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First,
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plant trees until they grow
,
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they consume sunlight and carbon dioxide as energy.
Then
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, the farmer begins harvesting those trees and sends them to factories to cut them into small pieces.
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this
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, send them to labs to extract cellulose and add chemicals,
afterward
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, study their genetic forms and add sugar
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then
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, then
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add microbes in order to produce
ethanol
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and use
them
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it
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as dioxide
to
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for
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cars,
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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and trucks.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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