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The line graph depicts the number of foreign visitors coming to the UK for various purposes from 1989 to 2009.

The line graph depicts the number of foreign visitors coming to the UK for various purposes from 1989 to 2009.
The line graph depicts the number of foreign visitors coming to the UK for various purposes from 1989 to 2009.
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, the number of people visiting the UK experienced an increase during the period.
In particular
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, the figure for holiday was dominant over the other reasons. In 1989, people visiting for holidays accounted for around 6.5
million
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, which was the highest figure among all categories. From 1994 to 1999,
this
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 number reached a peak of nine
million
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. Until 2004, it bottomed out at the figure of 1989, which was about 6.5
million
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, before recovering to nine
million
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 after 2009.
On the other hand
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, at the beginning of the period, business trips were nearly 5
million
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 visitors,
while
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 meeting friends and relatives stood at under 4
million
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 in 1989. The numbers
of
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for
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 both purposes rose steadily over the years, reaching 8
million
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 and 7
million
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 respectively prior to falling to around 7
million
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 for business and over 6
million
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 for family visits by the end of the period.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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