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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart illustrates the ranking of ten
countries
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 in electricity
production
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 and
consumption
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 in 2014
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, China and the United States were the largest producers and consumers of electricity,
whereas
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 the remaining
countries
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 showed significantly lower figures. In most
countries
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,
production
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were
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 higher than
consumption
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and
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 Germany is the only
expection
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exception
. China ranked first in both categories, producing 5,398
billion
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kWh
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 and consuming 5,322
billion
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kWh
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. The United States followed with 4,099
billion
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kWh
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 generation and 3,866
billion
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kWh
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consumption
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.
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, the gap between
production
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 and
consumption
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 in the US was the largest among all
countries
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. Russia, Japan, and India were in the next position. Russia produced 1,057
billion
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kWh
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 and consumed 1,038
billion
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kWh
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. Compared to Russia, the gaps between
production
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 and
consumption
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 in Japan and India were larger.
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, India produced 871
billion
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kWh
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 but consumed only 698.8
billion
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kWh
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. Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and South Korea were all in the lowest level, ranging from 600 to 450
billion
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kWh
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.
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, Germany was the only country where
consumption
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 (582.5
billion
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kWh
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) exceeded
production
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 (526.6
billion
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kWh
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).

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, production, consumption, billion, kwh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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