The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
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illustration reveals clearly how to use
corn
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to produce
the
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apply
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ethanol
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fuel
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. It
totally
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has seven steps
while
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processing the
corn
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.
First,
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the collected
corn
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will be
storaged
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stored
. After that, the
enthanol
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ethanol
fuel
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worker will
milk
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mill
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the
corn
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into
liquid
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a liquid
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form
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. The
corn
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juice will be cooking for 4 hours,
water
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and water
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will
also
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be added during the cooking time.
Then
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, the liquid
form
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corn
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of corn
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will be
fermenting
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fermented
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for 48 hours.
Next,
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the people will
seperate
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separate
the liquid and solid
corn
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. The solid
form
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corn
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of corn
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will
sold
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be sold
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by-product
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as by-product
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,
while
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the liquid
form
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corn
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of corn
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will be kept for purifying
ethanol
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for 5 hours. When the
ethanol
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fuel
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is
fininshed
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finished
, the worker will store it and send to worldwide through different
transportations
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transportation
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.
That is
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the whole process of how to produce
the
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ethanol
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fuel
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words corn, ethanol, fuel, form with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 0 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ethanol
  • corn
  • harvesting
  • milling
  • cooking
  • fermentation
  • distillation
  • dehydration
  • enzymes
  • fermentable sugars
  • concentration
  • anhydrous ethanol
  • fuel
  • processed
  • mixture
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • high temperatures
  • surface area
  • separation
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