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The table shows the change in the number of cinemas in defferent regions in a European county between 2004 an 2009

The table shows the change in the number of cinemas in defferent regions in a European county between 2004 an 2009
The table provides information about how the
number
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 of
cinemas
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 changed in five different regions in a European country between 2004 and 2009
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,
while
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 the total
number
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 of
cinemas
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 rose slightly over the
period
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, the
City
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Centre
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 and Near
City
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centre
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 experienced growth,
whereas
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 the
number
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 of
cinemas
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 declined in both the Countryside and Suburb
, but
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areas, but
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 in Suburb areas , considerably decreased in
this
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period
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. The
number
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 of
cinemas
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 in the
City
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Centre
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 increased by 3.1 % over the five-year
period
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, rising from 1,512 in 2004 to 1,620 in 2009.
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, the Near
City
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Centre
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 experienced a slight growth of 1,6 %, the numbers rising from 300 to 400 over the same
period
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.
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, the Countryside region experienced a slight decrease from 108 in 2004 to 90 in 2009 , representing a 6% decrease,
while
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 the Suburb areas recorded a significant drop of 25 % over
this
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 5-year
period
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 , going down from 40 to 30 in the same
period
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, cinemas, period, city, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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