The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table at the top represents the changes in the
population
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in New
York
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City between 1800 and 2000. The tables in the middle and at the bottom show the changes in the
population
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in five different
areas
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of the city (
Manhattan
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, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) in the same period.
Overall
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, it is clear from the tables that in two decades, the numbers increased significantly as the
population
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of all five neighbourhoods rose, especially in Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens and Staten Island. In 1800, the
overall
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population
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of New
York
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City was 79,216 , and
Manhattan
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was the dominant among all 4 districts in the percentage of total
population
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, 60,515 (76%) ; the other 4
areas
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made up only 24% with a
population
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of 18,701 residents. After one decade, the numbers reached 3,437,202 in all 5
areas
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, 1,850,093 in
Manhattan
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(54%), 1,587,109 in the other 4 districts , and with it the percentage doubled , showing 46%. Later, in 2000, the
population
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increased noticeably in 4 neighbourhood
areas
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and reached 81% of the total
population
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in New
York
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(6,471,089).
In contrast
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, the
Manhattan
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district, where the percentage dropped to 19% as the
population
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has not changed (1,538,096). Generally, the
overall
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population
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of New
York
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reached 8.009.185.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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