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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The graph depicts the data from 2008 about the
energy
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 consumption in the USA from 1980 to estimated figures in 2030. The units are given in
Quadrillion
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.
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, Petrol and oil are the most consumed
form
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forms
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 of
energy
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 throughout the period given.
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, all types of consumed
energy
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 will rise by 2030, except for hydropower. Petrol and oil dominated the table in all years, starting with 35
Quadrillion
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 in 1980, gradually increasing, estimated to reach its peak of almost 50
Quadrillion
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 in 2030. In terms of natural gas, it was
initially
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 the second highest with 20
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 in 1980, declining to around 15
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 in 1985 before gradually increasing to almost 25
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 in 2015, and
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 it is predicted to remain unchanged for the next 15 years. Coal experienced a steady increase, and in the year 2015, it is estimated to overtake natural gas and reach approximately 30
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 in 2030. All the remaining methods of
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 consumption started with about 5
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 in 1980. Nuclear and Solar/wind usage will increase to over 5
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 by 2010.
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, Hydropower, despite a marginal fluctuation, will remain steady from 2015, and it is forecasted to have the same usage as its initial year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, quadrillion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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