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The table below shows the results of a survey asking US consumers about shopping at K-Mart. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of a survey asking US consumers about shopping at K-Mart. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table chart illustrates the findings of a survey which asked users of
United
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 States about shopping at K-Mart.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Add some linking words.
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Linking words: Add linking words.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer preferences
  • big-box retailer
  • demographics
  • frequency of shopping
  • overall satisfaction
  • negative feedback
  • specific product availability
  • price competitiveness
  • convenience
  • survey results
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