The chart illustrates average co2 emissions

The Line graph illustrates the approximate range of CO2

emmissions

Correct your spelling

emissions

in metric tonnes between: United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal; during 1967-2007.

Overall

Linking Words

, the graph fluctuates

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Jul 24, 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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The chart illustrates average co2 emissions

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative trend?

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Write a letter to friend to ask him/her to take care of your children while are away for a business trip. Tell her: - What food do they love to eat - What activities they like to do - What arrangements you have made to pick them