The chart illustrates average co2 emissions

The Line graph illustrates the approximate range of CO2

emmissions

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emissions

in metric tonnes between: United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal; during 1967-2007.

Overall

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, the graph fluctuates

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Jul 24, 2025

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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The chart illustrates average co2 emissions

some people think governments should spend money on measures to save language with few speakers from dying out completely. others think this is a waste of financial resources. discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, poverty has become a serious issue around the world. What are the problems that can occur because of this issue and suggest some solutions to overcome this problem

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Some people think that children should start formal education as early as possible, where as other people think children should not start until the age of Discuss both views and give your own opinion.