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Writing Samples
Band 5

1.You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no one has replied to your complaint. Write a letter to the taxi company. In your letter say why you are writing and how you feel explain what happened tell them what you would like them to do.

Dear Sir os Madam, I am writing to you to provide my feedback on the
last
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 trip I took with your company, and I hope that you understand
whow
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how
 much I am disappointed about it. Let me explain my situation here. I ordered a taxi
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 day because I had an interview with an employer in a respectful corporation, the trip was going well untill the driver told me to pay him more than what the counter displayed, i refused to do that, so he decided to come out of the car and he screamed in the middle of the street and called me a thief in front of the compony, so i paid him more. I
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kindly request a refund from you for the extra charge I paid him, and I want an
appology
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apology
 from the driver because of his bad
behavior
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 with me. Thank you for
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your
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 consideration. Best
regard
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regards
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, Lamar

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coherence and cohesion
Use a more formal way to address the recipient. Check spelling, like 'who' instead of 'whow'.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to be clear and organized. Each paragraph should have one main idea.
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Be careful with grammar and sentences. Try to rephrase them for clarity.
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Make sure to use polite requests and choose words that sound more formal.
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You expressed your feelings clearly about the situation.
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You explained what you want them to do, which is good.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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