The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the method of producing

honey

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step by step by the

bees

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.

Overall

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, the process includes seven stages of

honey

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production from the hive to

packed

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in a jar, which can be used for human consumption.

Initially

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, the

bees

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live in a hive where they can live and work together as a colony.

Workers

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bees

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fly to flowers and collect

nectar

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by using their long, tube-like tongues and store it. After

that

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the

bees

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get back to the colony and pass

nectar

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to other worker

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, who store it in wax cells. After storing it in wax cells, the

bees

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start to fan the

nectar

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by

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their wings to evaporate the excess water. The next step after the water evaporates from the

nectar

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it

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, it

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becomes thicker and turns

it

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apply

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to

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into

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honey

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. The

honey

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is ready to be capped by the

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with wax and

use

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used

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it

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apply

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as

a

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apply

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food or put in a jar to

use

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be used

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for human consumption.