The bar chart shows the population output in Asia Europe and other countries

The bar chart shows the population output in Asia Europe and other countries
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows the population output in Asia Europe and other countries
The bar chart illustrates the changes in
world
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production output from Asia,
Europe
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, and the
rest
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of the
world
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in five different years: 1840, 1880, 1920, 1960, and 2000. In 1840, Asia was the dominant contributor to global production, accounting for approximately 50%, followed by
Europe
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at 40%,
while
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the
rest
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of the
world
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produced only around 10%. Over the next 80 years, Asia’s share significantly declined, reaching a low of about 20% in 1920,
whereas
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Europe
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experienced a steady rise, peaking at around 50% in the same year. During
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period, the
rest
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of the
world
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also
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showed growth, rising to approximately 30% by 1920. From 1920 to 1960, Asia’s output remained relatively low,
while
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both
Europe
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and the
rest
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of the
world
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contributed equally, each with around 38–40%.
However
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, by 2000, Asia’s share recovered sharply, once again becoming the highest among the three regions at about 45%.
In contrast
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,
Europe
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’s output declined to roughly 25%, and the
rest
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of the
world
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also
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saw a slight drop, producing around 30%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words world, europe, rest with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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