Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. what is your opinion about this? what other time in history would be interesting to live in?

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of people would say that the
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we are living
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is the best
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then
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the
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in
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. Well they are right indeed.
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so much in many different vast traits
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includes
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,
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medicines, Engineering, Biology, Science, Physics, Chemistry, and a whole lot of other things
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to
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. In the present
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we have honed multiple techniques to broader levels.
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, these break throughs helps us to grow more and more. In the
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no one heard about
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treatment
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treatments
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such
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as laser surgery and bone grafting.
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, In the past the aching tooth have to be removed and now new theories are found to save the tooth at all costs just to look natural.
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, the credit goes to
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itself as well if we look closer. Because we only advance to
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lengths
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because
of our previous teachings and
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hard work
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break through
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help
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us to advance
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and
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. But if we talk about
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in
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total,
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there were many interesting civilisations.
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as
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of romans,
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of Egypt,
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of Persia,
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of Mohinjudaro and many other but if i chose to live in a previous
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. I would choose
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beacuse
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because
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am very fascinated by the
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Rome
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civilasation
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civilisation
. I would like to experience the environment of
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and
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it
feels
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like to live there. There are several
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aesthetics
in
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as well.
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often research on
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and 'The Great
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Colosseum
'.
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Roman kings were often
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to be kings with no feelings or
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not value
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life. As many
of
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slaves and prisoners
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left in the
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Colosseum
with lions and many wild animals
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, etc
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. In conclusion, I would say that the present
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we live in is much better than
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history
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. Because we learned from our past mistakes and
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them into
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a struggle
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for a better life. In the past
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, ofcousre
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ofcousre
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of course,
there
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were
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not
to
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big
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of
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environmental problems like
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today's
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much we are
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developed
enough to tackle and take care of the environment as well and come up with some beneficial results in
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scenario.

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You have good ideas about the present time and historical periods.
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Your conclusion clearly states your opinion on the topic.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unprecedented
  • prosperity
  • technological advancements
  • global connectivity
  • longevity
  • opportunities
  • self-expression
  • renaissance
  • exploration
  • industrial revolution
  • roaring twenties
  • unparalleled
  • groundbreaking
  • transformative
  • revolutionary
  • epoch-making
  • flourished
  • transcended
  • innovations
  • distinguished
  • renaissance artists
  • explorers
  • innovative entrepreneurs
  • exhilarating
  • era
  • unforgettable
  • boom
  • vibrant
  • exuberant
  • transformed
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