The line graph shows the number of kilometers traveled per car in five countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the number of kilometers traveled per car in five countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows the number of kilometers traveled per car in five countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives data on the number of
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kilometers
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kilometres
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that
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apply
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traveled
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travelled
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by each
car
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in five
diffrant
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different
countries from 1990 to 2010.
Ovarall
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Overall
, Britain was the only one
got
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that got
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inceasd
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increased
,
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.
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However
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,
United
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the United
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States, Germany, France and Japan got
dicreasd
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decreased
.
United
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The United
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States stay in the
liad
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lead
by
traveling
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travelling
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by
cars
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car
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.
Finaly
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Finally
, Germany was in the
secand
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second
place but
evenshly
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even
britain
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Britain
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toke
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took
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the
secand
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second
. The five countries got some changes
,
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.
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However
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,
The
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the
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UK was the only country that
have
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had
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been
increasd
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increased
. The UK started with almost 1300
kilometeres
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kilometres
per
car
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but it
start
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started
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to rise slowly
to
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until
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1995
,
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.
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After
1995
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1995,
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it
barly
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barely
rise
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rose
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antel
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until
2010. The
rast
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rate
was
geting
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getting
chalp
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apply
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dicreasd
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decreased
,
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.
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In
the
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apply
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1990 United States
start
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started
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with around 1700
kilometeras
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kilometres
each
car
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but
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, but
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the number
was
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apply
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increasd
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increased
to
became
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apply
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1800
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kilometers
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kilometres
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in 1995
and
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, and
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it
wasen't
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wasn't
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istable
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stable
between 1995 to 2010
, on
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. On
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one
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the one
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hand
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hand,
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Germany and France had the same thing
they
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; they
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was
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were
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stable between 1990 to 2005
after
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. After
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that
they
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, they
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got
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apply
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decline
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declined
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,
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. On
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on the other
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hand
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hand,
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Japan was the
loest
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lowest
on
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in
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traveling
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travelling
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by
car
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in
1990
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1990,
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it almost 700
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kilometers
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kilometres
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it
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; it
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got
dramatcly
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drastically
dcreasd
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decreased
to
be
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400 kilometres
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in 2010 400
kilometers
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words kilometers, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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