The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration below demonstrates the process of producing instant noodles as a quick and easy meal.
Overall
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, the production includes 8 stages from storage silos, where the main ingredient is available, to labelling and sealing the
cups
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. First of all, flour is transported from storage silos to the factory by trucks.
Second,
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water and oil are added to the flour in the mixer. The mixed batch goes to the rollers, producing the dough sheets.
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, the sheets are stripped into dough strips and, in the subsequent stage, become noodle discs. In the following part, the noodle discs are cooked in the oil and dried,
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they are put in the
cups
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. After that, vegetables and spices, and other seasonings are
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added to the
cups
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to give the instant noodles their characteristic taste.
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, the
cups
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would be labelled and sealed to meet safety standards. In turn, they are delivered to the shops and markets for sale.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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