The diagram below shows how flour is made from wheat. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how flour is made from wheat. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how flour is made from wheat. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph above is a process chart
provides
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that provides
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key information about the flour production of the wheat.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph
that
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is
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it is
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a linear phase,
also
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consist
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consists
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of eight
stage
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stages
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.
In
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addition
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addition,
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it is a
man
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man-made
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made, with only one raw
metarial
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material
grain
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, grain
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, compounded
them
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apply
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with chemicals and vitamins.
According to
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what is shown,
the first step is
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to collect the grains,
then
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shift
it
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them
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to clean
it
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them
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from dust and dirt,
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secondly
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secondly,
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make sure again it is clean, by
put
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putting
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it in a container to purify
them
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it
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with air. In the third step, add the wheat
on
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into
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a machine to crush it down. fourthly,
compund
Correct your spelling
compound
them with chemical staff to bleach them. In terms of the least steps, continue to add them in
empty
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an empty
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container to the next step, which is adding 3 types
vitamins
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of vitamins
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.
Then
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after that, pack them in
a
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apply
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white bags
,
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apply
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to put them in cars
out
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apply
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for delivery. The
last
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phase
,
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apply
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is delivered to the supermarket.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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