A museum near your home is looking for people to do unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntery work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the volunteer work in your letter explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Mr. Andersen. My name is Tomás Alcaide, and I
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to you regarding the recent advice that I saw yesterday on the
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History Museum website, in which it was claimed that you are seeking
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volunteers
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voluntary work.
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is because I find nothing more valuable than teaching others about the history and nature of our beloved nation. Since I am already a science teacher at an elementary school
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the zone, I am sure my previous experience will help me to give a great experience to every visitor, especially
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for the little ones who might think that a museum is not as fun as going to the playground at the park.
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, I would be available on
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from 2:00 pm until 6:00 pm and on
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:00 am until 1:00 pm. Looking forward to having an interview with you to discuss on my application for the job. Yours faithfuly. Tomás Alcaide.

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grammar
Make sure to correct spelling mistakes, such as 'voluntiers' to 'volunteers' and 'faithfuly' to 'faithfully'.
content
Try to add more details about your passion for history or nature to strengthen your letter.
coherence
Use a clearer structure by dividing your ideas into distinct paragraphs, focusing on one main point per paragraph.
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You clearly express your desire to volunteer and your passion for teaching.
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You provide specific days and times you are available, which is very helpful.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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