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The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.

The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.
The given table illustrates the data on how many full-time
students
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 from India enrolled in different universities in the UK,
as well as
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 the change in numbers and percentage increase for two academic years.
Overall
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, it can be observed that BPP
University
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 had the highest
number
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 of Indian
students
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 in
first
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the first
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year
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 and Coventry in
second
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the second
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year
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. Meanwhile, Sheffield
University
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 showed the highest percentage rise in the
number
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 of
students
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 from 2020-21 to 2021-22.
To begin
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, Sheffield
University
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 witnessed a tremendous increase of 187.7% in Indian
students
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 2345 in 2021-22.
Similarly
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, Coventry
University
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 saw a surge of 2900
students
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 from 2390
students
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 in 2020-21. Another significant rise was seen in Leicester
University
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, which rose by 103.4% reaching 2390
students
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. Moving on to the other three universities,
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number
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 of Indian natives in the
University
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 of Greenwich and Anglia Ruskin
University
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 soared from 2455 - 4540 and 1925 - 3265, respectively. Meanwhile, BPP
University
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 had the highest
number
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 of full-time
students
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 from India in the
year
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 2020-21
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 a figure of 3505.
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, it experienced the lowest percentage increase of 46.8%, making BPP
University
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 the second most popular in the second
year
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with
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 the enrollment of 5145.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, university, number, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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