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The graph below shows the population of India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the changes and projections of the
population
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 in
India
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 and
China
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 in the period
of
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from
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 2000 to 2050.
Overall
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, both countries are expected to have
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significant growth by 2050.
While
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India
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 will surge drastically throughout,
China
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 will peak
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 the mid-2020s before it starts to gradually decline for the next two decades.
Initially
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,
China
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 outnumbered
India
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 by 250 million. It
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 presented an incremental growth in
population
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 from 1.25
billion
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 to around 1.45
billion
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 till mid-2020s.
This
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 trend will take a turn in the next two decades, decreasing steadily to 1.4
billion
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 by 2050, resulting in a 150 million
population
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 rise within the period.
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,
India
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 had a significantly lower count in 2000 at around 1
billion
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.
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,
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 to
China
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’s gradual growth, its
population
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 skyrocketed to 1.4billion in 2025, and will surpass
China
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 in 2030.
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, experts project that the
population
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 will keep soaring until 2050 and the number will end at 1.6
billion
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, china, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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