Write a report with this question: The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011.

Write a report with this question: The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for Write a report with this question: The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011.
The bar chart illustrates the types of media that
community
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the community
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of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011.It can clearly be seen that there has been a decrease in the number of
population
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people
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who use social networks as the age increases. As can be seen, the proportion of people who use microblogging is the highest,
while
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people who use radio is the least.
Overall
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,
We
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we
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can see that the number of microblog users
are
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is
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the most,the number of radio users
are
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is
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the least.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • media usage
  • age groups
  • digital media
  • traditional media
  • preferences
  • news consumption
  • social media
  • online news
  • newspapers
  • television
  • balance of media
  • demographics
  • reliance
  • trend
  • engagement
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