On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter, explain What you lost How you lost it What you want the insurance company to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Mohammadreza Hadavi, and I am writing
this
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letter regarding a problem that I faced during my trip to Canada. Unfortunately, I went to visit a museum in Toronto.
While
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enjoying the historical accessories, I noticed that I had lost my phone, a Samsung A56 5G 256 GB with a black cover, which was detailed in my insurance policy beforehand. Actually, I reviewed the entire time. I realised that the
last
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time I used it, I called my mother on the metro.
Then
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, I put it in my pocket. The metro was busy that day, and I considered that someone might have stolen it from me. I reported the incident to the police. I have attached the police report associated with the incident, and I hope that you will be able to reimburse me based on my policy as promptly as possible.
According to
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our agreement, theft
while
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on holiday is covered in my membership. I appreciate your assistance in
this
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matter. If you have any
further
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questions, do not hesitate to contact me by email or phone. Yours faithfully, Mohammadreza Hadavi

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task response
Add a brief introduction before getting into the details of what you lost.
coherence cohesion
Use simpler sentences to make your ideas clearer.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to check your spelling and grammar before sending the letter.
task response
You clearly stated the item you lost and how you lost it.
coherence cohesion
The letter has good structure and flows well.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable possession
  • insurance claim
  • misplace
  • irreplaceable
  • receipt
  • policyholder
  • reimbursement
  • coverage
  • claim number
  • deductible
  • documentation
  • authenticate
  • liability
  • premium
  • accidental loss
  • indemnity
  • beneficiary
  • contact details
  • substantiate
  • correspondence
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