1.You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter odescribe the public event oexplain why you think he/she would like the event owrite how you can help your friend with accommodation

Dear Maninder, I hope

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letter finds you in the best of your spirits. I am writing

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letter to invite you

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Auto

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the Auto

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Expo 2025, which is going to be held in New Delhi from 24 December at Pragati Maidan. In

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event, a number of car manufacturers from all over the world will participate and showcase their upcoming vehicles.

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, many participants will display their innovations, which could change our future vehicles

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such

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apply

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self-driven cars, etc. I am aware of the fact that you are pursuing a degree in Automobile Engineering and you have

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attended many events like

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in recent times. Because you are very passionate about cars.

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, I want

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you to attend

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exhibition too, because you will be learning many useful things. I want to

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tell

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you that I have arranged an accommodation for you as well with one of my classmates. He is currently living in a 2BHK apartment

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he will be more than happy to host you during your stay. I am looking forward to hearing from you on

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. Hope to see you soon. Yours lovingly, Jatinder.

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Jul 30, 2025

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Try to include more specific details about the event to make it more engaging.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure each paragraph has one main idea for clarity.

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Use a softer tone in the invitation part to express excitement about the event.

tone

The letter has a warm and friendly tone.

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You've clearly explained the event and why your friend would enjoy it.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

190 words

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public event
cultural festival
annual
spectacular
performance
exhibition
recurring event
one-time occasion
attraction
highlight
interest
hobby
unique experience
local culture
accommodation
stay
recommend
bookings
transportation
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1.You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter odescribe the public event oexplain why you think he/she would like the event owrite how you can help your friend with accommodation

Some people believe that the internet has made books and libraries obsolete. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Provide reason and support with examples.

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