The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015.

The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015.
The provided maps give information about the alternation of the suburbs of the Fosbury town from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
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, the
city
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has witnessed notable changes in its residences, the road systems and the greenery, and new amenities were
also
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constructed throughout the entire period. Starting with the map from the 1980s, the
city
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had two types of accommodation: the adjacent
houses
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and the terraced
houses
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. The former, located top-left
side
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of the map, remained untouched in 2015,
while
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the latter, which was positioned in the northeast of the
city
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, was relocated to the park area that was moved to the right
side
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of its previous location.
Additionally
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, a new supermarket and a car park
was
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were
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erected
instead
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of the terraced
houses
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. A hotel, next to the Grocer’s shop
that is
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near the block of flats on the north
side
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of the map,
have
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has
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remained unchanged.
However
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, the Grocer’s shop and the residences were demolished.
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the maps, two new facilities, including a sports centre and a car park, were built by the removal of the tennis courts that were situated bottom-left
side
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of the town in 2015.
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, the town of Fosbury’s
roads
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road
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system has
showed
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shown
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noticeable changes, with
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the constructing
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constructing
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the
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roundabout that divided the
city
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into four clear sides.
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, in the southeast, the
ware
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warehouse
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houses
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area was built by removing the fields

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, houses, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • outskirts
  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • residential area
  • commercial area
  • public amenities
  • environmental conservation
  • lifestyle quality
  • industrial zones
  • transportation infrastructure
  • green spaces
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