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Some people feel that teacher training courses can make anyone a teacher while other feels an excellent teacher cannot be made by perusing course. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

individuals
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Individuals
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 feel that teacher training courses can
anyone
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help anyone
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beacom
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become
 a teacher
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.
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other
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the other
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 hand, some people
feels
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feel
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very
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that very
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toturs
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teachers
 cannot be made by
perusing
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pursuing
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course
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a course
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. In my view,
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it
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 depends on the personal type
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; some
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 people rely on teachers more
them self
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than themselves
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, so it's critical
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to do
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assesmnt
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assessment
 or
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way
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a way
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 to evaluate.
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, the studies
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show
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student
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students
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 in Saudi Arabia rely on
teacher
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teachers
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 in training
course
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courses
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give
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to give
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 them a high level of
perusing
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pursuing
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mathood
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math
 it's
help
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helps
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 them to pass
by
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with
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perusing
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pursuit
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way
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indicated
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is indicated
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 as one of the best
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way
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ways
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 in
saudi arabia
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Saudi Arabia
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 over
past
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the past
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 six years.
To sum up
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, we need to have a simple
way
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 to teach and look into the
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results
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 from that.

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task achievement
Make sure to clearly state your opinion in the introduction.
coherence and cohesion
Organize your ideas into clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words like 'firstly', 'however', and 'in conclusion' to help the reader follow your ideas better.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples and details to support your points.
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You demonstrate an understanding of both sides of the argument.
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Your conclusion summarizes your main point well.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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