The graph shows the number of fatal injuries (resulting in death) of workers in New Zealand between 1992 and 2010.

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of

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injuries

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leading to death in New Zealand, over an 18-year period, from 1992 to 2010. At first

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it is clear that

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the total

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of fatalities saw a decrease over

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period. What is more, the most fatal

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in workers

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in 1994. In 1992, 6217 workers passed away

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it kept

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by approximately 400 workers by 1994, making it the highest

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of accidents over these 18 years. The

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of fatal

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injuries

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dropped back to 6275 in 1995 and remained fairly stable until the end of 2001. The deadly

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accidents decreased to 5534 in 2002

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after a slight rise through the next four years, it experienced a decreasing trend and fell from 5840

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in 2006 to a low of 4551

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in 2009. The

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of fatal occurrences was almost the same in 2010, which made the

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two years of

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period

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the lowest

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of fatal

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.