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information about which type of device people Correct subject-verb agreement
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use
in Use synonyms
age
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the age
18
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group 18
a
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apply
TV
in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
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in age
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start
to Replace the word
started
use
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then
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apply
who
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those who
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Laptop
in 2019 Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
was
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apply
gradually decreased
since 2009.
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decreased gradually
TV
users Use synonyms
was
just above Correct subject-verb agreement
were
quarter
in 2009 with 34%,Correct article usage
a quarter
while
in 2019 Linking Words
this
number Linking Words
was
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had
significantly dropped
to only 4%.Correct word order
dropped significantly
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people in Canada Linking Words
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tablets
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then
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than
percentage
of Tablet owners Correct article usage
the percentage
was rised
to 14%.Laptop likers Wrong verb form
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was
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apply
this
number Linking Words
was
plunged to 12%.
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apply
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was
being popular in 2019 than in 2009,as can be seen,their have 15% in 2009,their popularity in 2019 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
was
jumped to 26% Verb problem
apply
overall
.It is obvious that Conventional Linking Words
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lost Use synonyms
their
popularity in 2019Fix the agreement mistake
its
,
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;
so
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so,
Canada
citizens Replace the word
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stayed
to Verb problem
continued
use
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TV
,but Use synonyms
change
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changed
it
to FlatCorrect pronoun usage
apply
.
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screens.