The diagram below shows the process for producing bottled and canned carbonate drinks.

The process chart illustrates key information about how the pop drinks are manufactured

,

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and

pack them

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packaged

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. begin

from

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with

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cleaning the

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,

then

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ends with delivering them to the store.

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, it is clear from the graph that it is a linear phase with 5 stages.

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, the raw material is only

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water

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a lot of artificial steps.

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what is shown,

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, cleaning the

water

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by

filltered

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filtering

the

water

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from the wastes,

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adding

chemicals

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substances.

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,

evaporated

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the

water

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the

dagree

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temperature

when it is

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put into

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the heater,

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flow the

liquaid

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liquid

into the cooling pipe to

decline

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reduce

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the heat.

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, put the

water

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in a

contener

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container

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carbon dioxide. In terms of

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the third stage, the carbonated

water

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flow

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flows

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down to the

maxing

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mixing

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machine to flavour and

colouring

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the

water

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,

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make sure it

good

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is good

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by

fillter

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filtering

it

againg

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again

. Fourthly, they either bottled or preserved them in

separated

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boxes, 5 items for the

bottels

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bottles

and four for

tinneds

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tinned

one

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ones

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. The

last

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stage

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it

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is ready to be delivered to the supermarket.