Advertisements have great influence in determining what we buy. Some people think that there should be laws to control advertising while others argue that companies should be free to advertise however they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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huge impact on selecting what we

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purchase

.Some experts say that the government should

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enforce

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to control

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other members of the society say that the

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to control the advertising market for many reasons.They believe that many individuals

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pressure

them selfs to get the latest product on the market just because of its Ads and paid

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of certified experts claim that being

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so regular these days and they should spread awareness.The reason behind all of

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think it should be stopped

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members of the public say that the

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should be stopped

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be aware of what they buy since no one forced them to buy the product.

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many have said that some individuals should seek help to fix their shopping

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from a professional expert.

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they have clarified that companies are guilty

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false information and

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purchase instead

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them. In conclusion,I think that the government should

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companies

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of them advertise with false and

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point and they definitely should be stopped.