The chart below shows the oercantage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Whales between 1918 and 2011.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the oercantage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Whales between 1918 and 2011.

The graph illustrates the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in the United Kingdom and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

Overall

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, the household in rented accommodation is decreasing dramatically over the period.

In contrast

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is the highest value among all years.

On the other hand

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, the ownership will increase significantly to be higher than renting. In 1918, households in rented accommodation reached their highest point by nearly 75%, and

then

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started to fall modestly to exactly half in 1997, and

then

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continued to drop to reach 30% in 2011. Alternatively, household in owned shelter was almost a quarter in the beginning, and

then

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started to rise to reach the highest level at a larger proportion in 2001, to end the period by just over 60% in 2011

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is double

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when it started. In 1971, both types were at the common point , which is exactly

the half

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halfway

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Aug 6, 2025

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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