you work for an international company, and would like to spend six month working in its head office in another country. write a letter to you manager. in your letter explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six month say how your work could be done while you are away ask for her/his help in arranging it
Greeting's Mr.Fahad
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a transaction to
in the main office back in
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for six
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, I do
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it will be a great chance for me to
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in IT.
, I will keep doing the same
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to
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usual. I will
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not
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in my main office here in
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Make sure to structure your letter with clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea.
Check your spelling and grammar for better clarity. Avoid using contractions like 'Im'.
Clearly state how your work will be managed while you are away in a separate paragraph.
Use a more formal tone and phrases, such as 'I would appreciate your support' instead of 'I'm seeking your support'.
You have a clear goal of wanting to work in the main office, which is a good start!
It’s good that you mentioned your commitment to complete your tasks while away.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.