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piano
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violin
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20-year-period
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20-year period
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piano
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the piano
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number of figures
drum
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the drum
violin
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are
relatively less.
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is
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guitar
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the guitar
and
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learning
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children learning
piano
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were
approximately 10%. Correct subject-verb agreement
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, the proportion of playing Linking Words
drum
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the drum
violin
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were
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was
were
only about 35%, which was less than 50%.
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,
2015, the dominant instrument that school children Punctuation problem
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decide
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guitar
, which Correct article usage
the guitar
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accounted
of
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piano
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the piano
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piano
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a sharply
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which
suggested that the number of Punctuation problem
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students
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, the percentage of learning to play Linking Words
drum
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the drum
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violin
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the violin
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