Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in vacant areas of cities and towns, while others argue that housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?

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areas must be built on their residential places,

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others think it is much better to plant trees.

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essay will discuss my opinion on why I agree that planting is more essential than buildings, to avoid an environmental crisis, and to control the high

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of residents.

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with, trees are much needed nowadays, especially for

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modernised nations, because they are highly predicted to face poor quality of air, which will lead to

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the danger of global warming,

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the

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caused by industrial activity. There are a lot of factories there that contribute to the

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, the usage of fossil fuel is highly demanded for cars, and even

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public transportation.

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, a recent study has shown that the

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rates worldwide, the in countries that have less planting approach, and they face poor quality of air.

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will lead to a serious crisis, so we need to increase the

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of trees to reduce the amount of

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in the cities.

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, the vast majority of people are living in urban cities based

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a recent research, and at the same time, they have significant

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rates. So, States must be held

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and try to address a solution by reducing the

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of citizens. Based on the studies, there is an association between the

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of people to the

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if the population grows, the

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increases. That's why we have to decrease the

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, and plant more. In conclusion, planting is a key master indicator of

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successful countries

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they have better weather

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and fewer buildings.

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, on balance , of course, I totally agree with the need for

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green development.