The maps show the layout of school in 1985 and at the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the layout of school in 1985 and at the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show the layout of school in 1985 and at the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps give detailed information about how the school developed over time.
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it is clear that
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there was a dramatic change in the structure of the school, particularly in the development of a pool, fitness centre and many trees. It is
also
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worth mentioning that an office, a
car
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park
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and classrooms remained unchanged over the given period. Looking at the details, the remaining 3 buildings, one of which was a
car
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park
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on the north side. The
car
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park
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and the road infrastructure were turned into a crescent shape.
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, the road was shortened and is now replaced with trees. The playfield at present is much smaller than in 1955 , which was cut off a little bit for constructing a pool and a fitness centre. The library on the south side of the office was demolished and replaced with a Learning Resources Centre with a computer room. In 1985, the
car
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park
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and classrooms , which were located on the east side of the library, were flattened , and classrooms were replaced with a bottom for computer room.
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, in 1955, there were
classroom
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and
classroom
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blocks before converting into more
classroom
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and
classroom
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blocks, added 3 storeys

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