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The table above shows a survey on the preference of different age groups in a European country on different TV programmes in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The table above shows a survey on the preference of different age groups in a European country on different TV programmes in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates a 2012 survey about the proportion of a three-
age
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group
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 (11-15, 15-20, and 21-25) and which TV program they preferred to watch in Europe.
Overall
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, the three
age
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 groups have different programs they are inclined to watch. The most commonly watched shows per
age
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group
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 are cartoons for ages 11-15, feature films for ages 15-20, and the
news
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 for ages 21-25. As for the unpopular programs, the
news
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, TV dramas, and cartoons are voted the least for the youngest, middle, and oldest populations, respectively. In terms of
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the 11
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-15
age
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 bracket, the
group
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predominately
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predominantly
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 consumed cartoon shows, documenting 29% of the population,
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 only 6%
was
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were
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 in
favor
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favour
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 of watching the
news
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. A complete opposite was seen in the oldest
age
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group
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, where 23%
was
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were
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 recorded to avidly watch a
news
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 program whilst only 4% preferred watching animated content.
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, the teenagers and young adults primarily tuned in to
features
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feature
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 films
having
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, having
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 23% of votes. Other notable programs that showed
news
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, cartoons, and sports were considerably watched, attaining 19% and 18%, respectively.
This
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 is the only
group
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 that has a double-digit
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percentage of
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 results across all categories, as the documented lowest preferred show (TV dramas) acquired 10%, unlike in the other
age
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group
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words group, age, news with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.
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