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Band 3.5

In some countries, companies allow people to work from home. In others, people are still expected to work in an office. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, companies allow individuals to
work
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 remotely,
while
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 others still offer office-based employment.
This
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 essay will discuss both perspectives ,
along with
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 my opinion
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while
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regarding productivity and creativity.
To begin
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 with, there are a lot of firms that depend on
online-
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online work
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work
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.
This
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 kind of an environment workplace can be
a
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suitable for
low income
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low-income
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 companies. Which
mean
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,
instead
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 of using supplies and money in
contruction
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construction
 and maintenance offices
place
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, we can save and
utilize
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utilise
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 it on bonuses and paid vacation for employees, which will help
rise
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raise
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 their productivity.
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,
according to
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 a recent study, employees in a digital business can perform better compared to those who are working
on-site
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in on-site
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 businesses.
On the other hand
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, companies
who
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that
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 are still using offices for working have a great advantage, which is
a
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strong teamwork. Teamwork in on-site
work
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 is more efficient than digital one, and that happens
as a result
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 of
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 face to face.
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, a recent study found that office-based
work
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 is more reliable in
a
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group projects compared to telecommunication . In conclusion,
although
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 online-based
work
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 has great advantages
as
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in
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 saving money that was
utilized
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utilised
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 in constructing and developing,
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an In-office
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 job is a good option, especially in
a
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apply
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group projects
jobs
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or any task that
require
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requires
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a
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teamwork.
However
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, I personally prefer the online job as it
appear
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appears
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for
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to
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 me more convenient, because of the extra payment that will boost the
workers
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worker's
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 performance.

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grammar
Fix basic grammar errors and spelling to make the meaning clear.
structure
Use clearer link words to show flow between ideas, e.g., First, Also, However, In addition.
content
Give specific examples or facts, not just say 'a study'; this helps your point.
paragraphing
Keep one idea per paragraph and make sentences shorter for easy reading.
spelling
Check spelling carefully (construction, communication, online) and keep phrases simple.
structure
There is a clear plan with introduction, two body parts, and a conclusion.
ideas
Your opinion is shown and ties to the main ideas.
readability
The writing is easy to follow and the main points are easy to see.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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